At the new camp she was allowed to settle into her small cell, the first time she had had a room of her own since joining the commune, and then had to...see the camp leader."Are you a virgin?" was his first abrupt question to her.She gave a little gasp of surprise before nodding her head."All right, take your shift off." What?" Take your shift off." But ... but..."He started towards her, an ugly expression on his face, his fists clenched. One fist lashed out and caught her just beneath the eye.. Along a similar line, the pacing was way off in the beginning of the story. Susannah’s chapters went too slow, and Cindy’s chapters went too fast. I should have better balanced out the Rebellion POVs. Unfortunately, I was posting a chapter every time I finished a chapter, which made it quite difficult to go back and fix things like that. Which is why, in the future, I am going to write several chapters, and then release one at a time so I can get feedback while still giving myself some leeway. More

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